Ethar VS Orenji. Rematch.

[Orenji]

Orenji watched as Ethar quickly spun around, and began to launch a few of his own blasts at Orenji's. The blasts meet in the middle and exploded on impact, more dust was whipped up. Orenji watched, even though Ethar was able to stop some of his blasts one still got through. Ethar saw this coming, and quickly brought up a shield of his own stopping the blast.

"Clever Ethar, you have gotten faster at reacting to your surroundings as well."

Orenji was surprised to see Ethar, quickly drop his shield and kick the blast back at him. He just smiled and prepared to backhand the blast out of the way. Something happened, a high pitch hit Orenji's ears, a sharp pain ran through his body. Orenji was unable to stop the blast from colliding into him. The blast exploded on contact, creating another cloud of dust around Orenji.

"What was that? That noise, the pain I have to fight through this."

Orenji stepped out of the dust, the slight pain still ringing in his head. He looked up at Ethar, and saw him doing something, but the noise was coming from his direction. Orenji extended his left arm out, pointed his index finger at Ethar and launched another Dodonpa Ray at him. Hoping to make Ethar stop doing what ever it was he was doing.

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Ethar wasnt expecting for his tactic to work, so when Orenji's own attack successful hit, he finally sighed in relief, as he stopped whistling to catch his breath. "What was that? That noise, the pain I have to fight through this." He heard him say, and it was then he knew his secret weapons was very effective.

"Its called Whistling!" He said, as Orenji fired off another beam towards him. He leapt out of the way, letting the attack impact in the ground near him. Panting more, He was getting too tired to whistle anymore, so he had to think, and be clever with his next move, as it could very well be his last.

He slowly got up to his feet, and quickly made out a stratagem, as he suddenly took off running towards Orenji. However, unlike his other approaches, He never jumped, but kept running right at him. And when he was close enough, he did jump a bit, but not every high, as he would attempt to slam his fist right into Orenji's kneecap in an attempt to make his leg buckle.

[Orenji]

"Its called Whistling!"

"Whistling? Why would someone do that during a fight? Well Ethar, it seems you knew something that I didn't. Well that isn't going to work again."[/i]

Orenji watched as Ethar charged across the plains, straight for Orenji. He dropped back into a defensive stance. He waited as Ethar got within a foot of Orenji, then slightly jumped off of the ground and threw his fist at Orenji's kneecap. Orenji took a step back, making Ethar's attack just barley miss. Ethar was now going to be in some trouble, With him being so close.

"Nice try, but you are still to slow."

Orenji quickly threw his right hand, that aw now clenched into a fist at Ethar. The attack would slam into Ethar's back, causing him to slam straight into the ground. If the first attack hit, Orenji would try to grab Ethar, lift him off of the ground, and with enough force throw him into the same mountain that he collided with before.

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"I learned a few things during my time here!" He said, just before He saw Orenji dodge his attack, and came back with his own, smacking Ethar in his back. "Gah!" He said, as Orenji then grabbed him, and threw him into the mountain again.

Pain wrecked Ethar's body as he was embedded in the rock again, but this time, he was stuck. Plus, he was too tired and sore now to pull himself out. "Ugh...Y-You win again Orenji..." He said, as he reverted back to his base form. He cought up a bit of his blood as he looked over to the Giant Namek. "L-Lil help?" He asked, as he tried to pull himself free of the rock that held him. "Im gonna need some healing to. I... think I broke something." He said, as he pinpointed where the pain in his body was.

[Orenji]

Orenji watched Ethar slam into the ground, then soar through the air colliding once again with the mountain side. Orenji waited for Ethar to rip himself out of the mountain and continue the fight, but that didn't happen. He looked to see Ethar stuck in the mountain, It appeared to him that he may have thrown Ethar a little to hard.

"Ugh...Y-You win again Orenji..."

"I won't accept this as a win Ethar, it was merely a friendly spar. You have learned a lot in these past few fights. I have no doubt next time the outcome will be different."

Orenji returned to normal size, walked over and put his weights back on. He looked back at Ethar and was confused as to why he hadn't pulled himself out of the mountain side yet. Orenji began to make his way over to Ethar.

"L-Lil help? Ethar said "Im gonna need some healing to.I...think I broke something." Ethar said pointing to where the pain was

"Well I guess I put more force behind that toss then I originally thought. Hold on Ethar I will give you a hand."

Orenji said as he slowly removed Ethar form the mountain, placing him on the ground. Orenji instructed Ethar to lie down while teh healing was taking place. He brought his hands over Ethar, a light orange began to glow from Orenji's hands. He placed his hands on the broken area and began to heal Ethar. The process would take an hour or so, but once it was done Ethar would be back to 100%.

(PL for me please with weights)

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"I...learn with every loss." He said with a soft groan, as he watched Orenji revert to his normal form, and slowly removed Ethar from the mountain. When he was laid down, and started to get Healed, He said "See what happens when you go into your giant form? Hah...Its ok..." as he took a deep breath. His side hurt, but it was in the process of being healed as he felt his rib cage move back into its proper place.

"Gotta admit it though, That was a good spar. Almost had ya when I whistled at ya." He said wit ha soft laugh.

After he was healed, Ethar thanked Orenji for the spar. Every time he did spar with Orenji, he learned how to fight better, as it was much better then sparring with a practice dummy, though Ethar would need to get more powerful before he could take on Orenji, now that Ethar knew how powerfull he really was without those weights.

(Pl Please. Light Weights in effect)

[Geurin]

Orenji: 2250
Ethar: 2625

I wanted to make a few notes here about the fight. These are my observations to help you with future battles.

Ethar: I am not sure where you learned about the whistling. I know it is canon knowledge but where did you learn it IC? If you did in fact learn it in character than thats good, use it well. If not keep in mind that this is not common knowledge and has to be learned.

Orenji: Two things, First, I chose not to calculate your weights for because in your first post you mention being at max strength (Which of course means your weights did not have effect) and because you simply never mentioned having them on. The second thing is that charged blasts are in fact tougher to get around, even for somebody at Ethar's level. Perhaps the first charge could have been easily overcome, but the second one deserved a little more effort, if not a lot more effort.

To both of you: Keep the word count up, while its not everything it is something. This was a quick and simple read. Interesting diction and style help improve your grade.