Raiku Tanaka (edited)

[raiku]

:Name: Raiku Tanaka
:Race: Bio-android
:Gender: Male
:Age: 28
:Aura color: White
:Appearance:
:Techniques:

• The ability of flight
  
• Insane Barrage- a flurry of powerful kis
  
• Android barrier- is an attack like explosive wave only it can up held as a barrier for a short period of time.

:Starting Planet: Earth
:History: Raiku Tanaka was created by Lucas Tanaka, a mad scientist who was fired from the Capsule Corp labs after a strange explosion and an enormous amount of equipment was stolen. Lucas wanted to continue his work on a bio-organic cyborgs. In other words an android that is capable of having feelings, such as love, hate, Etc. Raiku eventually wound up taking care of Lucas in his old age. Lucas never told Raiku he is a cyborg since he died unexpectedly. The death of his Father devastated him and sent him into a downward spiral. He became icy and cold to others, he lost the only think he cared about, his Father. The only thing that seemed to ease his pain was exploring, like his Father always wanted to do, and combat. Raiku is now a wanderer and does small and odd jobs around the towns he visits and then leaves. Raiku feels, by doing this he is fulfilling his and his Father's destiny.
:Items: 200x Zenie 2x Senzu beans

[ammy]

1. I'm not really happy with mimic. Please pick another tech. Also, what is Android Barrier? and I'm guess by "powerful kis" you mean blasts of it?

2. History is a little short, I'd like a bit more substance to it.

[raiku]

Okay will do. thank you.

[ammy]

Once again, I'd like a bit more in the history. It just feels a bit empty. I suggest taking a look at our other androids and getting an idea of what we're looking for.