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Haze
Nov 9, 2011 13:53:04 GMT -5
Post by haze on Nov 9, 2011 13:53:04 GMT -5
Name: Haze Race: Sayian Sex: Male Age: 17 Aura color: Green arura, golden when super sayian Image: Attacks: Big Bang Attack: A fairly powerful blast attack fired out of a single palm facing forwards. Bukujutsu: The ability to fly with one's ki. Zanzoken: The user can move so fast he leaves an after-image, While attacking from another standpoint. Starting Planet:Vegeta Bio: From a very young age Haze has let nothing get in his way of power as he sees a man with no power is a man with no controll. Haze finds it hard to talk and connect with other people, this could be beacause of perents getting killed when he was three. He doesnt remember much of his brith perents apart there were killed it is a big part of his life to find out the truth behide it. snice being a young sayian lost on the planet earth a old man living by slef out in woods took him feed him and put a roof over the sayian head he also showed the arts of fighting, at the age of 13 his carer knew as dodo passes away in his sleep this is when Haze frist found out that he had to move on and get on his life as a sayian Zeni:200 Items: Photo of perents.
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Haze
Nov 10, 2011 12:28:16 GMT -5
Post by Gray Callahan on Nov 10, 2011 12:28:16 GMT -5
must spawn on Vegeta.
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Haze
Nov 16, 2011 14:52:24 GMT -5
Post by haze on Nov 16, 2011 14:52:24 GMT -5
okay then
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Haze
Nov 19, 2011 6:23:12 GMT -5
Post by haze on Nov 19, 2011 6:23:12 GMT -5
??
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Haze
Nov 19, 2011 6:55:14 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Nov 19, 2011 6:55:14 GMT -5
You forgot to edit in the change of starting planet. ^_^
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Haze
Nov 19, 2011 7:14:52 GMT -5
Post by haze on Nov 19, 2011 7:14:52 GMT -5
oh my bad
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Haze
Nov 20, 2011 10:05:47 GMT -5
Post by Gray Callahan on Nov 20, 2011 10:05:47 GMT -5
Well, considering we're moving to a new location in the next couple of days, it'd be great if you could be a bit patient. When the new site's created, copy-paste this Saiyan (see: spelling) and I'll then review it some more.
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Haze
Nov 21, 2011 15:57:07 GMT -5
Post by haze on Nov 21, 2011 15:57:07 GMT -5
yeah sure it could do with a better bio tbh.
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Haze
Nov 23, 2011 16:22:46 GMT -5
Post by Gray Callahan on Nov 23, 2011 16:22:46 GMT -5
We're not going to move in the end; however if you wish to make improvements then do so if you wish.
I'll look at it this time tomorrow in any case.
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Haze
Nov 30, 2011 13:00:10 GMT -5
Post by haze on Nov 30, 2011 13:00:10 GMT -5
I am happpy with it for now
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Haze
Dec 1, 2011 19:47:39 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Dec 1, 2011 19:47:39 GMT -5
Accepted since boliko basically did so before.
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