Deyaru The Vampire

[Deyaru]

:Name: Deyaru

:Race: Makaioshin

:Gender: Male

:Age: Many Thousands

:Aura color: Black mixed with tints of Red

:Appearance:



:Techniques:

• A Mouth Full - Deyaru opens his mouth as wide as possible and a beam forms out of it, made of fire and regular ki, but instead of burning, this attack just gives out regular damage, no burns.
  
  
• Pyrokinesis - Deyaru uses his inner ki to create fire and uses it to attack his opponent. This can vary from fire balls to adding fire to a basic attack.
  
  
  
• Flight - The ability to float and move around as fast as your body can carry you, or as slow as needed. Ki is used for this.
  

:Starting Planet: Earth

:History:

Deyaru's father was the King of All Vampires ....Well, he called himself the king of all vampires, but he only was in charge of a small faction. But of course, his father was killed by humans when they found out that his parents had moved in around civilization. After the death of his father, he was left to live with his mother, which didn't last long, because when he turned 10 in human years, his mother was killed as well.... Little did anyone know, Deyaru killed her due to her being a completely, psycho "bitch".

After he killed his own mother, Deyaru went traveling across the Earth for many years by himself. During most of the time that he was alone travelling, he spent years running through the forests, killing and eating animals and plenty humans while thinking in his mind that he was evil .... But he felt an inner good inside of himself, he just knew he had no choice but to eat people and animals, because he was a Vampire ..... But he knew he was a hero deep in his heart, and he had to some day prove himself a potential hero.... It was odd for a Vampire, but he couldn't be like the others, he knew he was different at a young age.

After a few years, he met an "old man", who was just a vampire who was turned as an old man, but he was extremely strong, and Deyaru knew it. Deyaru told him about his backstory, and the old man decided to train the young Vampire/Human hybrid. Eventually making the kid an incredible swordsman, and a very good ki controller.

For the next one thousand years, Deyaru trained vigorously, eventually becoming a decent fighter..... Now, he has been told by his sensei to go out into society and help the humans.


:Items:
200x Zenie
2x Senzu Beans
1x One-Use Space Pod

[Mori]

Hm... Both of the techniques are fine, but I'd like a little more expansion on the history. There's nothing wrong with it, it's just a bit short. Lengthen it out a litttttle bit more, and you're good to go!

[Deyaru]

How about now ?

[Mori]

Yeah, that's good. You don't need to make a beginner's post because you're already a member, so I'll assign your power level and you'll be good to go!